I was reading Patrick Tahu’s if i were brave entry, and just one word it was wow, it hit me on like 5 different levels 2 of which i can’t even begin to explain, it was great. It related to me tremendously, to me i took it as me not being able to say anything right or wrong, but when i want to say something i just cant or i just dont know what to say so instead of saying anything or nothing, i just sit somewhere sulking and thinking what to say. But instead i just see everything around me, so happy and upbeat, but i’m stuck in this pit of disappear . I really loved his entry, i really connected and it inspired me to write my own poem in response of his.
Great writing Patrick Tahu
